For Evan,
I am sorry to hear that you have two people who are close to you living with the same illness. One of your best lines in my opinion was the line where you said, "This problem she faces to day came from a lack of human knowledge on food during her life and resulted in her eating fatty food that clogged her arteries and is causing her to die". The reason i liked this line was because it shows that you had a good knowledge of this situation. Something you can work on is expanding a bit more on your thoughts. Overall good job though.
For Harry,
I was very interested through out your whole blog post and felt that you had a good understand of your family members situation. I feel like your most beautiful line was, "To recover from the situation, he embraced the fact that recovering from this stroke was a long term process, although he honestly admits that he first pushed it away". I liked this the most because it really shows that he was understanding with his situation and came to terms with the fact that he did have a stroke and had to deal with their situation. Great post overall.
-Max
I chose to use harry since my fellow group member did not do a post.
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